Zalzila :)

Q): Please note any RP experience you have (The Marauders are willing to help you if you lack experience considering you are willing to learn!)
(A): I use to Rp a lot in Warcraft, You ever hear of SOTRPG? you build you own rp from new. I Lack some

(Q): Why do you want to join us?
(A): When i start play wow in first place was because of RPG, but i was stuck on Raiding which i was stuck there, now that i have more time to RPG i really won't to join this guild because your lore is great and you RP sounds awesome.

(Q): What is your own definition of roleplay?
(A): Be someone that you can't be in real life.

(Q): What do you think makes a good roleplayer?
(A): Hard question well, Everyone has there pros and cons.

(Q): Do you wish to raid with us? If so what experience do you have.
(A): I have 5/14 heroic experience on my main, but he will stay in raid guild.

(Q): Are you interested in PvP such as rated battlegrounds and arena groups? If so, what experience do you have with these
(A): I am not so good whit PVP, but i am good at bursting people.

(Q): How did you hear about the Shatterskull Marauders? (Forum, friends, ingame etc)
(A): I have always know about this guild, never had time to actually apply and start rp.



IN CHARACTER (Meaning it's a dialog)
Greetings potential Marauder. It is required of you to answer a series of questions in moderate detail so we can assess your suitability to us. We are a warband built on bloodthirst, strategy, honour, strength and respect. If you lack these, you are not the candidate for us. However, if you think you have what it takes, carry on!

(Q): Please state your name and the race that you hail from.
(A): Zalzila*Silence in Old troll* He hails from extinct Death Stalker Tribe Trolls in Northrend There history is lost only Zalzila has his Tribe History.

Why do you want to join Warband?
(Q): When Zalzila first came to Kalimdor, he hear rumor about Clan so fierce and honor full that he has tried to seek theme up.

(Q): While with us, you will be required to fight. Are you willing to fight to the best of your ability for the sake of the Horde and the warband?
(A): Horde has treat Zalzila as family and Zalzila will protect his family whit every muscle in his body.

(Q): Please tell us a bit about yourself, this can be personal history, hobbies, or anything.
(A): Zalzila rarely talk, he talk only when need, because that how he was tought by last elder of his Tribe, to be quiet and strike when enemy docent notice. To get Zazila to talk about his Tribe is one thing in life time.

(Q): We are considered an elite fighting force amongst the Horde. What have you trained and specialized in? What makes you unique in combat?
(A): Zalzila has secret ability which last Death stalker Elder gav him before elder died, and that Ability will only Zalzila reval if one has earn his respect. Zalzila is Savage Rouge that fight which every muscle in body, he always know his enemy next move(another secret from Death Stalker Tribe). Zalzila was Master Scout before his clan was force to extinction( one of many hidden secrets) his ability to see prey from far distance.

(Q): We as a warband are not fond on cowardice, disobedience, or lack of strength. How will you plan to prove to us you lack these traits during your initiation period?
(A): Zalzila never back down from fight, and he will never disobedience one that is Higher rank theme him.

The Alliance have launched an assault on the Horde of vast proportions. Your home city is under siege, you are defending the walls against your race's foes.
Caught on patrol whilst trying to reach you, your friends in the Marauders are taken prisoner by the Alliance, and in time will be executed. Your people will never allow you to leave; you can only abandon your post in secret. Leaving your post leaves a blind spot in your city’s defenses, one the Alliance are sure to notice and use to break through the walls.
If you rescue your friends, there is no chance you will be able to re-enter your city.
There is no chance the other races of the Horde can send military forces to your home city as they are fighting on their own fronts.
Time is growing short...

(Q): Do you abandon your post and leave your city to die or do you break out under cover of darkness to rescue your friends?
(A): Family come before everything, if you dont have your family and fighting alone whit not family you will always be defeat but fight whit family and you will dominate field of war.

I am not sure whether your character's language is hard to understand, or it is the way you write. I personally would recommend you to try and use capitals when you write I, for example. Some of your sentences hardly make any sense to me. In my opinion, your English needs to be at least on a decently readable level before you can indulge in RP, but I will ask my fellow officers to read your application too. Good luck!

hey, I too, am an officer, i think that your capabilities of English would be a problem in RP, I find it difficult to read through this compared to other applications I've looked at.

I am sorry but I am declining your application based on the level of your english. But, since you are neither respecting the dialog (You were supposed to answer as your own character: I am...), I'm willing to let you edit it all out to answer correctly, with a simpler english. We don't require you to use complex british jargon. Just basic english. Good luck.

EDIT: Let us know when you've edited the post.